一度習慣が身につけば、それはわれわれに対してほとんど強制的な力を持つ。

English Translation

Once a habit has been acquired, it has almost compulsive power over us.

Very unnatural word-for-word translation… My alternative translation is:

一度身についた習慣は断ち難い。(いちどみについたしゅうかんはたちがたい)

In Japanese, we don’t prefer an inanimate concept for a subject. “A habit” is the subject in English, but it should be better to have “we” as the subject in Japanese, and then, to omit “we”.
ほとんど強制的な力を持つ also sounds very unnatural in this context.

断ち難い, in my proposed translation, consists of two words: 断つ (= quit; cut off) and 難い (= difficult).
If you need a literal translation for my proposed translation, it would be “(we) can hardly quit a habit that has been already acquired”.

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Portuguese Translation

Uma vez que tenhamos adquirido um hábito, este tem poderes quase compulsivos sobre nós.