就连最黑暗的夜晚都会结束,太阳仍会照常升起。

“Even the darkest night will end and the sun will rise.”. Not too sure about the 就 in the beginning of sentence, I guess it could mean: “Because even the darkest night…”.

I think it’s fine. 就 seems to strengthen/add emphasis to the first clause. At least that’s how I interpret it.